Half filled glass of water, what we see first? half empty part or half filled part? It is upto us? this out look towards life makes all the difference.

Strong winds have started blowing

Close all the doors , it may be some cyclone.

But why i think negative…

Today neighbour is hosting a party

I don’t know he will invite us or not

But why i think negative…

What is the time , oh son didn’t come back from school.

Is every thing alright ?

But why i think negative…

My article on triond is still pending.

I don’t know weather they will publish or not ?

But why i think negative…

I didn’t receive my salary yet

I doubt my boss  can stop it.

But why i think negative…

Sometime i think why i am like that

Shall i remain the same for rest of my life.

or i would try to stay away from the negative influences

shall i go to grave with music still in me.

Where is my vision , what a waste

 i am born to win but conditioned to lose

But i will follow the path of positivity

I will stay away from the negative influences

I will not let negative forces let me down

hey open all the doors and windows

let fresh air  enter in all corners of my home.

through all the negativity out of doors

who knocked the door ‘my son’

we all will go to ‘campfire’ tonight

 my family  was speech less

they all were smiling…

so do i……

do you ..?

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  • saniagul on Oct 5, 2011

    thats a lovely poem and we do tend to think negative and must try to change that habit. thanks for sharing! :)

  • Nxwtypx on Oct 5, 2011

    I tend to look on the dark side too. Don’t be sad about it, you’re pragmatic.

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 5, 2011

    it’s always good to be optimistic!

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 5, 2011

    It’s normal to feel negative from time to time, but when you catch yourself doing it, immediately tell yourself stop it! You could also get a loose rubberband and put it on your wrist. whenever you catch yourself saying something negative flick it. Next time you’re in a negative frame of mind you will associate this with pain

  • FX777222999 on Oct 5, 2011

    Lovely indeed.

  • foxpete88 on Oct 5, 2011

    good one..thanks

  • Ram Bansal on Oct 5, 2011

    Posiitivity peeps out of negativity only. If there is nothing negative, there shall be no positive also..

  • Lynn Hollis on Oct 5, 2011

    We all have these thoughts but we can choose not to dwell there. We can choose turn our thoughts to the positive.

  • girishpuri on Oct 5, 2011

    thanks all for value opinons

  • juny423 on Oct 5, 2011

    Nice thoughts … :)

  • Chinmay Chakravarty on Oct 5, 2011

    Positive vibes! Nowadays negativity is all pervasive and most powerful.

  • PSingh1990 on Oct 5, 2011

    Nice one.. Thanks for share..



  • naruto100 on Oct 6, 2011

    Very good thinking.. Positive attitude is important.

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Oct 6, 2011

    I like it.

  • lapasan on Oct 6, 2011

    Nice poem.

  • beingwell on Oct 6, 2011

    Smile always so you’ll attract more positive energy. :)

  • ittech on Oct 6, 2011

    thanks for share

  • The Soul Explorer on Oct 7, 2011

    Just smile!

  • girishpuri on Oct 7, 2011

    thanks all

  • zulfikar on Oct 7, 2011

    we think negative as we are afraid of negative

  • FX777222999 on Oct 9, 2011

    Revisiting this article.

  • athena goodlight on Oct 10, 2011

    Keep hoping.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Oct 14, 2011

    Motivational poem.

  • willie wondka on Oct 15, 2011

    I think its sometimes the easier option to think negative because so many bad things are happening in our world today, even the news on the TV never have any good things to tell us and the papers we read are all doom and gloom, I think that’s why we think like this, people should only bring good news and then we will all think positive.

  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 28, 2011

    Lovely! If we should feast our minds on positiveness.

  • ittech on Dec 30, 2011

    interesting post

    Good information.

    good share informative

    quite an observation

  • ittech on Jan 3, 2012

    A pretty good and informative article.

    Very well presented.

  • aheed411 on Feb 7, 2012

    Nice share

  • Safa on Apr 28, 2012

    this is a lovely poem, Girish. It gives a great message: that we should be optimistic and not let pessimism take over our lives

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