A rather silly poem about why and how I hate butter. Interesting.

The sickening smell

The heavenly taste

The bittersweet joy of how the taste buds scream with pleasure

But the arteries cry out for mercy

Oh, how I detest your presence

Your blindingly bright yellow color

How indescribably strange your texture is

You fill my nose with the smell of burning fat

Yet, above all else, you are delicious

Even so, I will hate you until the ends of the Earth

You have no place in my home, or in my heart

Away with you now, you vicious murderer

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  • caribbean369 on Dec 6, 2011

    This is VERY good! The ryhming in this really cool. It doesn’t seem silly to me; but, yes the poem is interesting and different; yet, it is a very creative poem. I love creativity. I try expand my creativity in each one of the poems so they’re somewhat different from each other; but, this poem to me was VERY enjoyable and delightful to read. Keep up the amazing work! Awesome job on this poem, Budy! :)

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 7, 2011

    Filled me with intense delight :)

  • PHILLY DREAMER on Dec 9, 2011

    Butter is good, it makes everything taste better. Come on you know you just want to put a little on your toast, your popcorn, even on a nice 3 egg omelette with extra cheese.

  • Budy236 on Dec 9, 2011

    Thank you all! But seriously, I really hate butter O.O.

  • Kristie Claar on Dec 19, 2011

    Good work, God Bless!

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