For my Kiwi flower.

Kiwi flower
My heart beats
Like butterfly wings –
Beats to brush your petals.
But across the ocean
A butterfly wing beat
Might cause a storm.
But not how I wish
To touch my
Kiwi flower.

Image via Wikipedia

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  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 17, 2009

    A very nice poem and I love the picture, I have not seen that sort of butterfly before.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 17, 2009

    Excellent work,

  • ceegirl on Nov 17, 2009

    great poem

  • Margaret Alden on Nov 17, 2009

    WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW.

  • Joie Schmidt on Nov 17, 2009

    Very nice*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Darrell W Penner on Nov 19, 2009

    I gather it is a butterfly from Tanzania. It is one of the images from Wikipedia that an image search program selected to chose from in the publication software.
    It just seemed right.

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