A witness enters the courtroom.

For her, it was a day of gloom,

by measured steps,

she walks her husband into the crowded courtroom,

where all is suddenly silenced,

the judge, the lawyers, the jury,

in the silence she felt the fury,

over their lives,

this trial took command,

as she guides him into the witness stand,

it was cold, but she felt the heat,

the lies should be quick and neat,

she touches his shoulder, whispers,

then retreats to a seat

the clerk rises,

do you swear

to tell the truth,

and nothing but the truth?

There was fear,

he felt it there,

I do,

his voice clear,

there was a young white girl,

crying softly in the back tier,

he was on the a justice stage,

and he almost felt the judge’s rage,

the accused,

staring with strange fascination

from the defense table,

just a few feet away,

his testimony, clean and neat,

and not guilty would be with him that day.

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Comments (26)
  • yes me on Feb 19, 2010

    Strange days
    Yet how can these two…. Smiths be on the same kind of wave length…. 6,000 mls apart
    A great piece Frank

  • yes me on Feb 19, 2010

    I’m sure I, have already said this…. but strange that we are 6,000
    mls apart but almost on the same wave length.
    great post Frank.

  • Lady Sunshine on Feb 19, 2010

    I would be terrified to be on the witness stand. Another good piece, Frank.

  • chellsy on Feb 19, 2010

    i have fun reading..thank you

  • deep blue on Feb 19, 2010

    Frankly speaking, another great write. Blind justice always feels the difference. Money talks.

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Feb 19, 2010

    Very good, keep it up.

  • LoveDoctor on Feb 19, 2010

    This is outstanding! keep up the good work.

  • albert1jemi on Feb 19, 2010

    Great work

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Feb 19, 2010

    That one needs at least three reads to get it all. Well done.

  • fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Feb 19, 2010

    Great post, intense and frightening. I felt the emotions and the pain.
    Awesome

  • devsir on Feb 20, 2010

    Excellent everytime

  • devsir on Feb 20, 2010

    brilliant

  • seema1962 on Feb 20, 2010

    GR8 work

  • Sourav on Feb 20, 2010

    Very intense write and that’s what I like about your poems.

  • sambhafusia on Feb 20, 2010

    well done..nice share..thanks for this..

  • AlmaG on Feb 20, 2010

    Fantastic poem!

  • willyonline on Feb 20, 2010

    Welcome In WORLD`s Friend. Its Best way to communicate & increase good writing also gets Best opportunity online through COMMENTS.
    Nice to see you on Triond. I just started my way to Triond. I hope it will be a great experience to see others writings also.”

  • Sammy2000 on Feb 20, 2010

    You know frank, I almost missed the crying girl, no matter what games are played in our court system the innocent gets hurt great write and clever briefly mentioning the crying white girl

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 20, 2010

    Excellent one…

  • RS Wing on Feb 20, 2010

    This was really good Frank. It reads like a short story with great rhythms and piercing clarity. A very real sense of drama. Great imagery you display in just a few words. Another great write brother!

  • standingproud on Feb 21, 2010

    Fank this is awesome, the fare of a powerful force is felt here you displayed so well.

    I have had to be a witness in the grand high court, and I was so nervous I could hardy speak.

  • devsir on Feb 21, 2010

    Another great entry

  • willyonline on Feb 21, 2010

    Nice one, Keep writing, Also my wishes with you…!!!

  • swatilohani on Feb 23, 2010

    stirring

  • lillyrose on Feb 23, 2010

    your poem tells an intriguing story

  • Evelyn M Carter on Feb 26, 2010

    Just as interesting as ever. Thanks for another Great Share Frank!
    Keep ‘em coming. :)

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