Some situations cause us to feel trapped. How do we get the other person/people involved to understand that we’re not happy here????

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Like a chained animal, willing

At this point, to gnaw through my own flesh

Just to be free from the prison

You have created for me

Four walls and your face

My only view, my senses dulled

Freedom denied, disgusted by it all

I despise the games I’m forced to play

Frantically running on the wheel

Believing I can advance

Explore beyond these bounds

Breathless I recognize the vicious, spinning circle

I’ve seen this all before

Wasting my time and effort, defeated

Remembering the countless times past

Trapped and deceived

Trying to make my way through the maze

Of lies and pretense

Only to find my path blocked

No reward at its end

And you, with me as your only source

Of amusement, have deceived yourself

As well, believing that here is where

I want to be

 

 

 

 

 

©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Adrn0919 on Sep 25, 2011

    Well written. I feel you pain through your words. I pray peace will again visit you my friend.

  • erwinkennythomas on Sep 25, 2011

    lovely!! moving!!

  • foxpete88 on Sep 25, 2011

    great, thanks for sharing.-

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 25, 2011

    This is thought-provoking. Nice work.

  • ittech on Sep 26, 2011

    nice work

  • CA Johnson on Sep 27, 2011

    Your poem was moving and very well written. I have felt like I was stuck in a cage at times too.

  • mdrkarim7 on Sep 29, 2011

    Pretty staff!

  • Tiki33 on Nov 3, 2011

    Amazing poetry the flow is astonishing. Thanks for sharing this creativity.

  • IQLion on Nov 8, 2011

    Really Nice.

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