Waiting on a important call.

Waiting on a important call

It’s like a stall

Only thing you can do is look at the wall

Your mind is bouncing like a ball

Soon your thoughts will fall

Waiting for that important call.

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  • 8Shei8 on Jan 30, 2010

    Make sure the phone is working :)

  • AlmaG on Jan 30, 2010

    Very nice. Yes that’s what we all feel when we’re waiting for an important call :)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jan 30, 2010

    gr88888888 thats precisely whats happenneing i ;m waiting for a call too gr88888888
    lhlhlh

  • T. S. Lewis on Jan 30, 2010

    The anticipation is great in this. Made me look at my phone as if I heard it ring

  • Oversoul on Jan 30, 2010

    This is very good,beloved…it made me think…very good.

  • CA Johnson on Jan 30, 2010

    This is great. It made me think of what I do when I am waiting for a call.

  • csramma on Jan 30, 2010

    Great post !

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Jan 30, 2010

    I say don’t sit down and wait. When you least expect it, he will call.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jan 30, 2010

    Sitting alone by the phone, waiting for a call, sometimes it seems like the phone will never ring.

  • Will Dee on Jan 30, 2010

    Is that a watched call never rings..lol… nice creative write!

  • Nitin Mudgal on Jan 31, 2010

    Thanks for share

  • Sushant94 on Jan 31, 2010

    haha! nice topic! and very true verse!

  • petercurtis97 on Jan 31, 2010

    Good one yes that phone call

  • ken bultman on Jan 31, 2010

    Similar to watching for the pot to boil.

  • Hettie on Jan 31, 2010

    I think thats why they invented the mobile phone you can carry on with what you have to do while waiting.

  • giftarist on Jan 31, 2010

    Creative write.

  • pattiann on Jan 31, 2010

    Short and sweet! I really like this poem! Keep up the good work!

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 31, 2010

    good one.

    Inna

  • Allison Jae on Jan 31, 2010

    I\’ve been there. It seems like when you\’re waiting for that important call it never comes.

  • ganeshgolha on Jan 31, 2010

    Great one! Its interesting.. keep it up. N thanks for the post,also go tru the one which I recently posted.. Thanks!!!

  • metro7 on Jan 31, 2010

    Well done waiting is sometimes unbearable.

  • Frances Lawrence on Jan 31, 2010

    Spot on, that is exactly how it feels.

  • cobaltinee on Jan 31, 2010

    Nice and simple quotes.

  • sambhafusia on Jan 31, 2010

    good and simple…

  • albert1jemi on Jan 31, 2010

    excellent share

  • albert1jemi on Jan 31, 2010

    great share

  • bailieman on Jan 31, 2010

    Simple and to the point.

  • seoprofessional on Jan 31, 2010

    liked it

  • Atanacio on Jan 31, 2010

    What can you say? I liked it

  • VTech on Jan 31, 2010

    nice , thanks for sharing

  • Doaa Abdelfattah on Jan 31, 2010

    Very nice, I liked it.

  • Judy Kaelin on Jan 31, 2010

    Very true, like the “watch pot” that never boils!

  • Snooky on Jan 31, 2010

    Go sit on the throne or get in the bathtub, the call will come.

  • Will Gray on Jan 31, 2010

    Good one! I hate waiting on a call.

  • Keerthana on Feb 1, 2010

    nice poem….

  • qasimdharamsy on Feb 2, 2010

    nice one…

  • JannyCZ on Feb 2, 2010

    nicely done

  • Kakraba Afful on Feb 5, 2010

    nICE poem, rated excellent. Love the rhyming, grace me once more with your magic words!

  • Rosettaartist1 on Feb 12, 2010

    So true!

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