This is my poetic and metaphoric way of ranting about people in my life. I give them different names base from how I view them. The poems are in 10-syllabic quartet with triple stanzas per person. These figures may be a part of my past or present…

To the man called Renowned Land

Incessantly you lied about my hand

Using your sweet tongue you poor Renowned Land

But firm is my grip on strength where I stand

Fight for my right “that” you should understand

My hand is now free, so free from your chains

Cold metal that tied me and gave me pain

A clear and straight path is now my feet’s lane

Purpose is to leave with peace in my brain

To you oh Renowned Land with hope I pray

Tranquil in your heart you’d find let it stay

Rain or shine do not connect… come what may

Please, just forget me as I leave the bay

To Elfwine of Agg

People of Agg, this I say ‘bout Elfwine

He’s a person without remorse and spine

No backbone and disabled who’s a swine

No shame for pain indeed he crossed the line

Parent’s money he openly squanders

His first born children counts three, no wonder

Planning his life with beer is such a blur

He has no dreams, no goals “that I concur”

Hearsay tells he left Agg for better life

Yet confused can’t decide who’d be his wife

His thoughts better hurry to avoid strife

For the “wives” are so adept with a knife

To Gillian of Ishkopach


Gillian, like Sophia, you’re a prey
Guards were down sealed the pact with Sir Doomsday
Innocence is a dance, like the ballet
Your lives so colorful like a screenplay

But you’re stronger than the noble damsel
You moved on swiftly in that you excel
You have strength that broke the predator’s shell
You laughed and danced as you bid him farewell

A wonder, by Sophia you linger
Your intentions are queries like thunder
Let it be, leave her, stay away from her
Don’t meddle don’t snoop don’t be a voyeur

To Lady Ariana of Costro


Lady Ariana you’re a true best friend
I am thankful having you to the end
All my secrets you hold straight with no bend
You listen well as my broken heart mends

How I wish all my friends would be like you
Feelings would be lifted, no longer blue
This kind of friendship is what I’d pursue
No lies, no deceit… it is just plain true

I’m truly thankful having you around
My joy, my happiness free without bound
Remember you said have feet on the ground
Where dark knights don’t linger and hang around

To the evil hag Ead of the Chiamaka Tribe


May sharp thorns wrap you Ead, you evil hag
The name “witch” should be written on your flag
You meddle with my life since yours’ a drag
My drudgery and toil you tried to snag

You look at me as if you are the best
But it only shows that you are a pest
My conscience is clean I am your tempest
Leave me be and stop snooping at my nest

You evil hag of Chiamaka tribe
These are all the words I want to prescribe
I’m noble, can’t be taken by a bribe
This I force in your head, you should imbibe

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