Can I Have Both?

Jane Jane on Nov 12, 2009

Tags: both, choose, friendship, love, Poetry, regret

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I just tried to write something at this very moment because Triond has been declining my articles for so many times.

Love or friendship?

Either one you choose,

You’ll feel incomplete.

The regret of losing the other,

Makes you and your choice,

Suffer forever.

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Comments (35)

papaleng on Nov 12, 2009
short but with powerful message! Don’t you worry, ako rin may article pa sa Triond, Nov. 2 pa nasa pending list..
Darla Cooke on Nov 12, 2009
Very nice!
Starpisces on Nov 12, 2009
Nice, but why can’t you have both?
drelayaraja on Nov 12, 2009
Oh awesome. Cool thoughts. You can have both. Nice thinking.
lillyrose on Nov 12, 2009
I know the feeling with triond rejecting you, they have me too. So I think we should some cake with the coffee and have a treat!
diamondpoet on Nov 12, 2009
They was really nice.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 12, 2009
Very expessive. Nice work.
xoxo on Nov 12, 2009
Can I prefer both? I wont simply lose one. Nice poem.
chitragopi on Nov 12, 2009
Of course you can. nice poem and a nice picture.
Hansika on Nov 12, 2009
nice one…
Vikram Chhabra on Nov 12, 2009
Love is friendship and friendship is love. So if you have either, you are the defacto owner of both!!
Will Gray on Nov 12, 2009
Good write! Sorry to hear they are declining your articles.
Marie Antoinette on Nov 12, 2009
Love and friendship go hand on hand. Nice poem. Rejection is part of being a writer, it comes with the territory, keep writing.
Themax on Nov 12, 2009
very cute short and awesome
wonder on Nov 12, 2009
They are spliced.Lovely!
Brenda Nelson on Nov 12, 2009
I have both.. just pick carefully.
ashan1614 on Nov 12, 2009
I like this a lot – you should EXPECT both. It’s so much better when you are in love with your best friend.
Webiny on Nov 12, 2009
I think it is possible to have both. interesting thought here.
cebuanaeyez on Nov 12, 2009
You can have both =) Do not worry! You are not alone. Triond declined some of my work too…what?!
inuni on Nov 12, 2009
Both is always best…But take it from somebody that knows when it goes sour, you lose your best friend and your lover…Now ask yourself, can you handle that, if so forge ahead.
Lady Sunshine on Nov 12, 2009
At least they accepted this. Triond’s issues have been REAL bad as of late. Nice piece.
Chris Stonecipher on Nov 12, 2009
i think you can have love and friendship together. My wife and i have been married for 18 years and she is my best friend.
ceegirl on Nov 12, 2009
short but nice.
Diverseblogger on Nov 12, 2009
Very deep words! Great poem
Cebah on Nov 12, 2009
So true…. to find both is a rare thing.
Eunice Tan on Nov 12, 2009
Very well said. A nice poem
Shirley Shuler on Nov 12, 2009
It is possible to have both, friendship can turn into love!
Mary Patricia Bird on Nov 13, 2009
Short and sweet.
unown971 on Nov 13, 2009
Wow!
Papa Sparks on Nov 13, 2009
Ditto all the comments here and also ditto the frustration we have all be having with Triond these days.
Paul2KAD on Nov 13, 2009
Nice piece.

Whilst I haven’t had anything rejected by Triond yet it would be nice to get some editorial feedback from them occasionally. They can be anonimous most of the time, it would be nice to feel there are people there working in the background.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 13, 2009
short but sweet one
KitKat93 on Nov 15, 2009
very good write
ScarTissue on Nov 18, 2009
Really sweet poem! and wonderfully written!
T. S. Lewis on Nov 19, 2009
You are able to say a lot with few lines. Great poem.

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