Can I Resist The Sinful Pleasure?

Darla Smith on Nov 6, 2009

Tags: curse, dark, demons, Desire, Ecstasy, Naked Flesh, night, Sinful Pleasures, Sinister, vampires, world

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A love poem.

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You come from a dark and sinister world,

a place where evil demons rule the night.

You were trapped among hungry vampires,

with no way to escape their deadly curse.

Now I can feel you reaching out to me,

searching for the connection we once shared.

Will I be able to resist the sinful pleasure,

as your fingers stroke my warm naked flesh?

Only you could bring me to the heights of ecstasy,

leaving me gasping and trembling from desire.

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Comments (20)

Themax on Nov 6, 2009
Amazing Darla just amazing!!!
Many thanks for share with me !!!
K.Reshma on Nov 6, 2009
Very nice
Starpisces on Nov 6, 2009
You wrote with feelings Darla, keep writing…
TroostAvenue on Nov 6, 2009
Vampire kink, a new genera? If it’s a hit, I’ll take credit for the name.
cutedrishti8 on Nov 6, 2009
Nice poem with great feelings..
diamondpoet on Nov 6, 2009
Nice write, I love the pic thanks for sharing
Christine Ramsay on Nov 6, 2009
A beautifully expressed piece. You have left me trembling.

Christine
cardy on Nov 6, 2009
I love this you are so good at vamp poems great work!
Linda Lori on Nov 6, 2009
And a pleasure to read!! Great work!
Milton H Peebles III on Nov 6, 2009
OH THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BETTER ONES!!!!!
Take Care, DreamSweet and let Your Heart Shine
~ milty
Vikram Chhabra on Nov 6, 2009
Very nicely expressed Darla!!
Emma Green on Nov 6, 2009
Your poetry is getting stronger and deeper.Good work!
Teves on Nov 6, 2009
Nice written Darla. Thank you!
Mystify on Nov 6, 2009
Wonderful work Darla with lovely usage of words!!
Goodselfme on Nov 6, 2009
Well done.TX
giftarist on Nov 7, 2009
Well expressed! Great work!
deep blue on Nov 7, 2009
What a forbidden love. Written with passion as always.
Annashank on Nov 8, 2009
Very well expressed
STEVE666 on Nov 9, 2009
Hot horror! Like it, Darla.
SweetpeepsLJ on Nov 11, 2009
Absolutely wonderful! Great work, Darla

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