Can I make you mine?

Can you hear my heart beat fast?
Can you hear my tears splash the floor?
Oh no hand to wipe them all
Can you hear me breathe when I fall asleep?
Can you hear my heart skip a beat?
Oh can you hear me speak?
 
Can you hear my calling dreams?
Can you see my weak?
Can you see the point I break?
Can you believe in me?
Oh can you hear me speak?
 
Can you call upon the angels?
Can you not make me weep?
Can you sing me songs at night?
Can you cuddle me to sleep?
 
Can you hold me in your arms?
Can you adore me please?
Can you reach my heart within?
Can you make me breathe?
Can you lend your sturdy hand?
Oh can you stand with me?
 
Can you come a little closer?
Can you make me smile?
Can you make the winds them blow?
Oh can I make you mine?
 
Can you dance the skies with me?
Can I hold you tight?
Can I come a little closer?
Oh can I make you mine?
 
Can you see the stars I arranged?
Can you see them shine?
Can you be, oh can you be really all mine?

His perfect and most cherished reply to me:
 
Oh if only I had the symphonies
Of the world at my beck
I would’ve called to play to you
All that I hear, all that I see
All that I feel, all that my heart weeps
But my lips just can’t seem to speak.
 

Fatema

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  • Shamyl on Apr 8, 2010

    Yes, I can…lol…

    Nice poetry Fatema. Good job.

  • Guy Hogan on Apr 8, 2010

    Can one lover love the other lover the way loving is meant to be? One never knows. Love can be a battlefield.

  • pearl2010 on Apr 8, 2010

    You can be with that person when he or she is totally free.
    Nice poem.

  • diamondpoet on Apr 8, 2010

    Very beautiful and emotional piece.

  • Frances Lawrence on Apr 8, 2010

    Well expressed.

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 8, 2010

    A beautiful and romantic piece.

    Christine

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 8, 2010

    Great Fatema, great, keep it up.

  • Fatema on Apr 8, 2010

    thank you all

  • Krupali on Apr 8, 2010

    beautifully expressive!
    how lucky u r to b reciprocated!!!!

  • Tina Cassello on Apr 8, 2010

    What a lovey poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 8, 2010

    very gr888888888
    do read my poem so titled/authspot

    Love can be a battlefield/authspot

  • Fatema on Apr 9, 2010

    hey thank u everyone

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Apr 9, 2010

    That was simply BEAUTIFUL. You really know what words to use and how to express them. They say when true love comes, your entire personality is affected and it takes you over. It’s a lovely feeling; the best feeling of all and this poem has captured it. Very well done.

  • Fatema on Apr 10, 2010

    thank you rajeev i always look forward for your comments :)

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