It’s hidden within.

the curTains are closed
and tHe world is dark
there you patiently sit
as you wait for a Spark

once you felt it burnIng
so wild and true
hoped it would stick around for alwayS
and never drift into the blue

they say that tingling Feeling will eventually fade
and that lOve will turn into a charade
but i don’t believe that to be Right
lovE is worth the fight

relationships failing
two people growing apart
loVers giving up too soon
why can’t pEople finish what they start

you have my heart until the end of time
it is forever; no reason nor Rhyme
i’ll stick around and never leave
and that is a promise you can believe

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  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 20, 2009

    I want to say “this forever” but I think I’m way off but this is very beautifully written just like all of your other pieces.

  • Debra. on Jan 20, 2009

    Is it, “Lovers?” It is a very beautiful and romantic poem.

    God bless.

  • nutuba on Jan 20, 2009

    I think the second word is Forever. Not sure about the first. I’m getting THSS FOREVER. Perhaps SA is right and it’s This Forever? At any rate, it’s a beautiful poem.

  • Will Gray on Jan 20, 2009

    Awesome! Is it This Love?

  • Blade619 on Jan 20, 2009

    Anagramed to… Their Versos
    Versos = poem or line or verse
    Title = Their Poem
    above is true if Versos is translatated from spanish into english
    Title = Their Versos
    Above is true if translation not needed.

  • faresabouelnasr on Jan 20, 2009

    ok,i will say the reality i like it

  • macon on Jan 20, 2009

    i don\’t wanna guess it.. but i really like this poem!

  • Mr Ghaz on Jan 21, 2009

    Excellent! very attractive poem. I loved it! Thanks for sharing

  • CrusnickNarutoUzumaki (from myspace) on Jan 21, 2009

    i’m going to guess “this forever” or maybe “this is forever” btw i love the poem nicely done

  • Ran Haber (from myspace) on Jan 21, 2009

    “This is Forever”

  • papaleng on Jan 21, 2009

    WOW! awesome, beautiful and innovative, Guess the word is This is forever..

  • Majic on Jan 22, 2009

    “This is Forever”
    I guess the poem says it too clearly as well!

  • Melody SJAL on Jan 25, 2009

    Awesome, I believe the title is This Is Forever. Great work as ever.

  • Sunshine Raines on Jan 31, 2009

    Great work the harder I looked for the title the better the poem was “This is Forever” is a great piece cant say it enough nice!!

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