A poem about really seeing.

When you look can you see.

Can you see?

the sparkles in the sun light,

when it bounces of a tarmacked road with all it’s might.

Them sparkles become star light.

Can you see?

A falling leaf that twists and turns to the ground with out a sound.

It’s journey has not ended to the sky once more it is bound.

Can you see?

A pyramid of colour red blue and green the prettiest colour’s you have ever seen,

from a simple CD held in you’re hand.

Can you see?

A tiny grain of sand,

that makes up a spacial sea even though it is on land.

Can you see?

A moth dancing round a house hold light,

trying with all it’s might to land on that light.

I want to tell it it’s not the moon I do hope it moves on soon.

Can you see what I see?

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  • Goodselfme on Sep 9, 2009

    It is wonderful when you can see these things and write about them. TX

  • Darla Cooke on Sep 9, 2009

    Very nice poem!

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 10, 2009

    Such a wonderfully penned piece.

  • Dena McCusker on Sep 11, 2009

    wonderfully written! thanks for sharing

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