Can You Sense?

Krupali on Jun 7, 2011

If it’s meant to be, then it will get across. (Caveat: No mystic element about this line)

This new day that I’m living

I feel good

This love that I’m drinking

I feel drugged

This hope that I’m breathing

I won’t give up

If this world’s good enough for me

And good enough for you

It will be for us too

…

But before that, my love

There’s a battle I’ve to fight

‘Cause I’ll shoot myself

but won’t betray you

Time will tell when it’s right

…

You can’t see through my eyes

I don’t ask for any biased faith

But I’m leaving enough evidence

For you to sense, just sense

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Aiyanna on Jun 7, 2011
For I know andsee in me your concscious heart,
Which is why I choose never ever to part.
For I know within me you will never betray,
Trust me in the same, through night and day.

But the showdown in the battle is inevitable,
But I know for sure my Concience is stable.
But without religion I am doing what is right,
To walk with the real you to hold on tight.

To wake you from your reverie and keep goal in sight,
To push away the infamy, that is holding on tight.
For what I want to see is the true innocent you,
The one of knowledge, calm placidity I loved true.

I use my instinct, which is beyond compare,
Its my survival instinct that you have to dare.
For I come through each battle a winner unscathed,
But will shed a tear for each wreath that is laid.

For when I look up and straight into your eyes,
You will see the real meaning behind those cries.
I was never simple and never will be,
An object of death, and charcterless infamy.
Krupali on Jun 7, 2011
You astound me Anisha. This is not your usual style. I’m awe-stricken caffeine already running through my nerves. .
Elove Poetry on Aug 8, 2011
yeah…. i can sense

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