I just can’t get enough.

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Oh my, Mr. Candy-man!
Looking so sweet
Please look my way!
I just want to taste you
Swirling upon my tongue
Give me some sugar
I can’t get enough
You’re the one I want
Like bees to honey
I so need you
My candy apple

Just one bite
That was all it took
And I was hooked

Hey there Mr. Candy-man!
My sugar-coated sweet jam
Looking so damn fine
A treat so sublime
You make me melt like butter
I just want to kiss you all over
You’re my favorite lollipop

Who makes my clothes drop
I just want to eat you up
From your glided cup
A decadent delight
Where my senses take flight
I’ll get you hard, boy
Like diamonds in my hand
My sugar-coated Candy-man!

Oh boy, can’t you see!
What a sweet pair we could be!
Painting the town red
Our inhibitions shed
So hold me in your arms
And kiss me hard
Dripping with toffee charm
My sweet-talking Candy-man!

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  • Jenny Heart on Sep 3, 2009

    Wow! That’s what I call creative writing. This is a winner of a poem. Great writing!

  • Collette Edwards on Sep 3, 2009

    very nice, candy apples are so tantilizing and you have done a bang up job defining this such a delishious craving, well done LOVE IT!! :D

  • Melody SJAL on Sep 3, 2009

    Sweet and very imaginative.

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 3, 2009

    A lovely idea. it sounds like the perfect partnership.

    christine

  • Lostash on Sep 3, 2009

    Cravings!!! You’ve got to love them…..in whatever form they take!

  • Shirley Shuler on Sep 3, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, I would love to take a bite of this candy man, you make him sound so delicious!!

  • ken bultman on Sep 4, 2009

    Whew! Wow, my computer just said this page cannot be displayed. Had to reboot.

  • giftarist on Sep 4, 2009

    creative!

  • papaleng on Sep 4, 2009

    Awesome combination of truth and imagination.

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