Healing words to a friend.

Even though you feel as though you can’t cope,
I am begging you to not lose hope,
You have made it thus far,
No, not without some very deep scars,
But without scars,
Who would you really be?
What would you really see?
I cannot erase the past,
I know that it is the painful memories
That always seem to last,
Sadly the people you trusted
Were not true,
What they did was not deserved by you,
I need you know that I am sincerely your friend,
I will be here for you
Until the end.

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  • nobert soloria bermosa on Apr 19, 2008

    ..wonderful poem, your friend is so lucky i should say,Why?
    because he/she has a very thoughtful and caring friend…

  • salvatore on Apr 19, 2008

    very beautiful words, nice poem

  • Bertie on Apr 19, 2008

    You and I really are so much alike yet very different. I truly love this one for it is what I would have written if I were you.

  • Francie on Apr 20, 2008

    So sincere, lovely and thoughtful!

  • Ed Moore on Apr 28, 2008

    Very powerful. Nice wordie selection. Nice combinations. Good composition.

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