Can’t Go On

lene21 on May 10, 2009

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This is poem about not being able to carry on. I think it is quite sad and deep. can you please leave comments and tell me what you think. And you can vote if you like. It would be very much appreciated. Thank you and I hope to hear what you all think soon.

Why do I feel all this pain
I’m soaking wet and in the rain
People who always put me down
Are you happy now?you’ve pushed me to the ground

People depending on me,to live up to my dreams
well, how can I? I can only face reality
I’m depressed and you now know why
All I can do is break down and cry

Sorrow’s here to break my path
when will I reside, from my past?
All my secrets hidden for so long
Well, I can’t, I just can’t go on

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ladybaby on May 10, 2009
YES YOU CAN, YES YOU CAN,! Don’t worry what others think of you. They are not the ones who are going through what you are. Turn the page and start over again. Once they SEE that you have changed, they will forget all about the past and accept you for who you are NOW. The first day of your life starts NOW. It is all up to you. Go for it.
lene16 on May 11, 2009
Thanks for all your comments ladybaby I have read them and they are a great help to me. They certainly got me thinking. x

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