Can’t You See a Poem

pattiann on Dec 28, 2011

Tags: butterflies, outdoors, recreation, wildlife

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Here is a poem about a man who means everything to me.

Can’t you see I am crazy about you?

I get butterflies in my stomach

when i think of you.

You never once called me.

While everytime the phone rings

My heart jumps a beat

thinking it might be you.

A gasp escapes me

When it is not you.

I feel numb inside.

Can’t you see all I have to offer you?

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Comments (16)

aheed411 on Dec 28, 2011
Beautiful hair
stonecutter on Dec 28, 2011
nice one.
girishpuri on Dec 28, 2011
can’t you see , good one
prsol46 on Dec 28, 2011
That’s very touching! I hope it works out!
Christine Ramsay on Dec 28, 2011
I do hope you get your man. This poem should do it for you.
castleboundbook on Dec 28, 2011
Wonderful! I hope that your man knows how much he’s missing!
Xakousti on Dec 28, 2011
just beautiful
lovinglyoursjuny on Dec 28, 2011
Nicely written as always dear.
I can see this poem and I can feel it
Thell Stars on Dec 28, 2011
great poem nice
erwinkennythomas on Dec 28, 2011
much feelings
CA Johnson on Dec 28, 2011
This is a beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
ittech on Dec 28, 2011
Very well presented.
Ruby Hawk on Dec 28, 2011
That’s beautiful, I hope it works out.
SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 28, 2011
Lovely words. Hope you get your dream man.
LCM Linda on Dec 29, 2011
Lovely poem. I can fully understand your feeling. Hope he knows as well and responds to you positively.
meandu on Dec 29, 2011
Truly beautiful! It is very sad when we are attracted to someone who does not return that attraction.

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