To have someone truly captivated.

My words are so deep that when i speak i create
a void in your mind.
It’s like a poetic poison running through the veins of
your membrane;
Paralyzing your state to maintain…
You can’t think of a thought to conclude…time has
refrained.
‘Though attempts you’ve tried to resist, still left you
commentless.
Like a sudden collapse of social structure that can’t
be revisited.
You try to rebuild your thoughts, ‘though my words won’t
let you in.
My words are so creative, your chances are way
too thin.
No wonder there’s no response…your mind can’t
take it in.
For I’ve left you speechless…captivated by-submission.

Image by Arenamontanus via Flickr

 

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  • ashan1614 on Apr 8, 2010

    It’s a powerful feeling to know that you do indeed have someone totally captivated.

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