Come hold my hand and walk carefree.

Completely carefree
That’s the way I like to be
Not a worry to make me sad
Just being happy and glad
There’s a spring in my step today
Better make sure there’s no delay
Walk with me for a little while
Then I can see your beautiful smile
It brightens up a dull rainy day
Watching the corners of your mouth play
Dimpled cheeks that are glowing
With confidence it’s growing
So come along with me
Be completely carefree

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  • Michal Dorcak on Jan 9, 2011

    Very nice poem. I actually imagined taking a walk with a nice ( andhappy) woman. Very pleasant moment when my imagination got lose, carefree too :) . Thanks.

  • Bruce Officer on Jan 9, 2011

    There are few times I’m completely carefree, but I do treasure them

  • bigpapadan on Jan 9, 2011

    Michal is correct, this did its job extremely well. Good work.

  • janesteban on Jan 9, 2011

    so good to be carefree sometimes….

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