About the pain and loss of someone special to you. Dedicated to all people who has ever lost anyone important.

 

Your love buries itself deep into my bleeding veins

Guilt penetrates my bones, tearing at my flesh

The pain serves as evidence, slashed across my wrists

If love us like a rose,

Then why do i feel such thorns?

An ocean of loneliness hits me, having welted in my eyes

Scarlet red is the color of unrequited love

The scars you let me keep, scorch deep into my thoughts

Unveiling my annihilation in its excruciating form

The blizzards of sorrow strike me, like a moth to the flame

II an still taste the corruption you caused, like acid to my tongue

Wonder if i ever infiltrate across the minefield of your mind

When my heart is falling to pieces,

Does your heart too?

In the end, the warriors were not broken

The carcass of the Lords kill was neatly bound in a gift box

How could you leave me,

Knowing i was lying inconsolably on deaths bed

The blinding darkness envelopes my forlorn soul

The simple desire of exhilaration, seems not a dream

But a nightmare, which prevails me from drawing breath

Now my phantasm becomes a reality ;

While i abandon the cosmos along with all your stars

The distance between us is dispelled once again :

And who can feel loneliness once they are dead?

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  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 11, 2009

    I was going to skip this one and write something of my own which i guess you might have inspired me to do, but how could i resist? i liked the beginning then my eyes kind of glazed over. Maybe it is time for a nap.

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