Carnal Lust

Lady Sunshine on Jan 3, 2010

Tags: carnal, Crimson, decadence, delight, Desire, dew, flesh, lust, petals, pleasure, Rapture, Ravishment, Red, scarlet

Surrendering to desire…

Shadows in the dark, fade to crimson red
As scarlet petals scatter, drenched in lust
Dripping in decadent dew, succumbing to desire
Bodies undulating in adoration, bathed in rapture
Flesh flickering upon each other, ravished by delight
Shimmering in titillation, bound by wanton pleasure
As breathless cries linger, whispering sweet sins
Reveling in the ravishment, drowning in debauchery
Clamouring from love’s abyss, seething in decadence
Forever chained to one another, in carnal opulence

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Mickey Pig Knuckles on Jan 3, 2010
Oh My Lady Sunshine, Whispering Sweet Sins. I love it as this is penned so beautifully by you and the image of the moist red rose is awesome. Your talent is glowing brightly as I Thank You once again for sharing…

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T. S. Lewis on Jan 3, 2010
Every word made love!
Sourav on Jan 3, 2010
Wonderful write!
deep blue on Jan 3, 2010
Sometimes carnal love could lead to the endless abyss. And endless abyss is eternity in the guise of pleasure. Whatever, you made your lines so passionate and forbidden, where the sweetest things in life are mostly free. Sometimes we have to get rid of high quality just to avail of low cost or giveaways however.
willie wondka on Jan 3, 2010
love your poem on the rose and where do you get your big words from?great poem.
Atanacio on Jan 3, 2010
You are an amazing writer keep it up!!!!
Guy Hogan on Jan 3, 2010
A poem drenched in passion and watonness. Red is truly the color of lust.
Shirley Shuler on Jan 3, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, so full of passion and I believe carnal lust said it all!!
AlmaG on Jan 3, 2010
I feel deep passion in every line. Wonderful poem LS
papaleng on Jan 4, 2010
Such a very passionate poem, where emotions overflow from each line. Like it!
ken bultman on Jan 4, 2010
You used up all the words in that fantastic poem there are none left for commenting. I can almost smell the rose the imagery was so real.
bailieman on Jan 4, 2010
A passionate poem, passionately written.
LOVELYHONEY on Jan 5, 2010
WHAT LOVELY WORDS WONDERFULLLLLLLLLLLL
8Shei8 on Jan 5, 2010
Such lustful words
alvinwriter on May 25, 2011
Very intense!
Coleen Hazeldine on May 25, 2011
Very good and interesting.
djbtol on Jul 27, 2011
Your choice of words does a good job of capturing carnal lust in all of it’s powerful beauty.

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