A poem.

Lights are flashing everywhere,

There’s people all around

What’s the big commotion?

Did the aliens fly on down?

Not today I’d have to say,

That sure would be a sight

Everyone’s at the carnival,

Gathered for the night

Cotton candy and the Ferris wheel

Would be the perfect end

A great night at the carnival

with family and friends

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  • sonnenblumen on Jun 14, 2009

    wonderful sight.

  • Will Dee on Jun 15, 2009

    It brought back wondeful memories I had of the carnival experience.

  • Atanacio on Jun 15, 2009

    this was pretty good I enjoyed the wuick read Frank :)

  • Starpisces on Sep 14, 2009

    I can imagine the crowds at the carnival..

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