Promises are made to strengthen, encourage, and avail the best in marriage or relationship.

With my heart I promise
That whatever I love to do
It will only be for you,
No second choice or priority,
But you for the rest of my life.

What is it that you’ve asked?
In doubt of what I’ve said?
No, no, my darling tell me
All your thoughts that’s on your mind,
To put to rest all speculative things.

I’m sure my darling you’d like to know
All my goings, my doings, and my likes,
Don’t be mad! Don’t even get sad,
I love you and I’ll make you happy,
For the rest of my days, till my last breath.

I love you my darling, nothing more, nothing less,
It’s a love that’s so precious to me,
Even mine life, I’m willing to lay down,
Whatever risk or threat it can resist,
For my love will carry us on to its destined crown.

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  • ceegirl on Aug 20, 2009

    promises can be broken.

  • alc on Aug 20, 2009

    This was a great write keep up the great work!!!

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 20, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 20, 2009

    sounds like a modern day fairy tale, good write :)

  • kathie107 on Aug 20, 2009

    This is so sweet, Very well done!

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