Carry on

ashleycollier on Apr 28, 2009

How ypu must feel about me.

Pointless trying to carry on,

I should have known you’re not the one,

I wish we hadn’t come so far,

before I found out who you are.

You never hear, you never listen,

I spell it out but you’re too distant.

You never spare me any time,

I chalk the floor, you cross the line.

I give new chances everyday,

just to have them thrown back in my face

so where from here do we go?

deep inside I think we know.

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Comments (11)

Joe Dorish on Apr 28, 2009
Relationships are tough.
Darla Cooke on Apr 28, 2009
I can relate to this poem.
Aauhein on Apr 28, 2009
Good job.
Holiday5 on Apr 28, 2009
I agree with Joe
Jo Oliver on Apr 28, 2009
Well done!
h20ho on Apr 29, 2009
I like the poem.. it’s about change and understanding.
Katien on Apr 30, 2009
I think this is very good. Easy to read and the end to many relationships well described.
vim3 on May 1, 2009
I guess everyone feels this once in a relation…very easy flowing poem.
Anne McNew on May 3, 2009
very well done. great work
LANESHA on May 7, 2009
I love the flow of this poem!
sam on Jun 3, 2009
hey man i thought that was kewl i like your style of writing

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