A little song that popped into my head, would sound good as a melodic/modern metal song with lots of acoustic instrumentals.

Verse 1 :

I did once agree,

Just one more little lie,

It won’t hurt a heart,

But the world began to cry.


Chorus :

I close my fist, I say goodbye,

To free my mind from this desire.

So now I’m dancing all alone..

It takes a step against the wall

Of the castle that shall fall.

I’ll carve our names into stone..

Verse 2 :

Is someone free?

If it won’t go today

The tears won’t stop.

You can no longer stay.

Chorus :

I close my fist, I say goodbye,

To free my mind from this desire.

So now I’m dancing all alone..

It takes a step against the wall

Of the castle that shall fall.

I’ll carve our names into stone..

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