Cat Flavor

Sonia Doreen on Aug 24, 2009

A Poem Hinting at the Keen, Hilarious, Acute, Observant Senses of a feline companion common in households worldwide.

Naughty and Nice

They run up and down,

Across the room,

On the Patio, on My Couch!

Their Speed is Incomparable,

Their Senses Intune

Their Eyes Shining Bright

On the Rising of the Moon

Nocturnal in Nature

Groomed and Composed

Only with 32 Muscles

Predators on the Prowl

Naughty and Nice

They run up and down,

Across the room,

On the Patio, on My Couch!

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Comments (7)

loualbert on Aug 24, 2009
I like the descriptions here about the feline, but I feel you could have done a bit more, but the poem did not come out bad.

By the way, would you check some of my poems on the site? I`d be glad if you did!
ken bultman on Aug 25, 2009
It was a dandy poem. Sometimes I wish mine would limit their antics to the patio and couch.
Darla Cooke on Aug 25, 2009
Very nice poem.
ashan1614 on Aug 25, 2009
Cats are peculiar creatures. Well said!
kizichat on Aug 25, 2009
Nice poem.
Sonia Doreen on Aug 25, 2009
@Ken..Thanks Ken, lol…Yes, mine are upto no good at all times too..
@ashan…peculiar and very inquisitive too ashan, thanks so much
@kizichat..thanks so much, just some instant thoughts.
@Darla…thanks so much Darla, glad you enjoyed it!
Tanya Wallace on Aug 25, 2009
Nice work,creaitve and original!

Hi there!