A plane going down…

 

First,

there was an exploding sound,

everyone looked around,

then the plane was going down,

the captain heard

his co-pilot utter a curse word,

but before he could take another breath,

and prepare himself for death,

the plane exploded in a cataclysm of light and sound,

and moments later,

only debris hit the ground.

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Comments (9)
  • voodoobrb on Mar 25, 2011

    Great share. Nice article

  • real lady on Mar 25, 2011

    A momentous and violent event. Another good poem Atanacio.

  • yes me on Mar 31, 2011

    Great pace in this chers

  • Playa-55 on Feb 3, 2012

    wow explosive in every sense of the word :)

  • Atanacio on Feb 22, 2012

    thank you playa for reading :)

  • FaceDAup on Mar 2, 2012

    kind of scarey yeah?

  • Ospice on Apr 25, 2012

    wow damn sad

  • Nolan68 on May 10, 2012

    one word Explosive!

  • Kitty-Kart on May 18, 2012

    Dramatic

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