My favorite place…

I go

down to the ocean

and the

cool ocean breeze

   she whispers

   the truth

   to me

Clearing out

all the debris

from inside

of my

cluttered mind

All the debris

that time

and repression

have been inclined

to create

I can now

let escape

to the

cool ocean breeze…

…she sings

so softly

to me

Roberta J. Morrison

(re) published April 1, 2010

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  • qasimdharamsy on Apr 3, 2010

    Nice one….

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 28, 2010

    The flow of this reflects the ‘debris’ imagery, a lovely poem Robin.

  • Tulan on May 11, 2010

    Love it,

  • Cinderella Can Dream on May 31, 2010

    Roberta,that is a lovely thought you shared. Everyone needs their own thinking spot to refresh and renew .

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