Never posted but an older piece.

I miss the ability to pluck from your featherbed what I hold dear
and you deem precious
I would by route
distract you with these well rehearsed false impressions
In softer muffled tones and spice riddled
Affirmations and accents
To teach,
and unlearn your mother’s cavet lector lessons
While the plum hue of my intentions gets the better of
me;
it mercifully remains hidden
at least partially in the dim light from where we are sitting
Cradled in an overstuffed button punch loveseat
leaving me in this pitiable condition

I want to forget my own vision and see you in
purposeful poses
Positioning the lotus for me to notice
Your ambiance wafting in the air like summer roses

I swear

I swear the swans have traversed the lake
and upon the shore of your submission have landed
and here I stand
At this moment the sum of my weakness and glands
and all of this why?
So I may pluck the daylights from your star’s
forbidden sky
Until exhausted you fall breathless into the slumber’s hands
©2010 J. K. Bradford

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  • dino renaldo on Nov 11, 2010

    i like this post

  • lapasan on Nov 11, 2010

    nice share.

  • strategy03 on Nov 11, 2010

    Nice Post. I like this

  • webseowriters on Nov 11, 2010

    Nice one

  • lillyrose on Nov 11, 2010

    I imagined this poem from a ‘times gone by’ view. Really lovely.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 11, 2010

    Yes, I wrote this many years ago. It’s content I don’t publicly display much these days.

    Thanks you Lilly, WEBSEO, Strategy, Lapasan and Dino for commenting!

  • Kaye TM on Nov 11, 2010

    nice one! =p

  • giftarist on Nov 11, 2010

    That was one wonderful and lovely piece.

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 12, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • LadyElena on Nov 12, 2010

    Nice. You have a lovely way with words.

  • LewSethics on Nov 12, 2010

    I’m not sure what it means but it sounds erotic.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010

    Loose Ethics, I am not sure why you read poetry. If you truly were a lover of verse, you would realize that it doesn’t matter what it meant to me or means to me, its what it means to you and/or communicates to you.

    You seem fixated on the analytics of my poetry for some reason, which gives me reason t pause.

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010

    Thank you Elena. :-)

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 12, 2010

    Thnaks Kaye and Giftarist~!

  • Adrn0919 on Nov 14, 2010

    Very nice symbolism and description. Nice poem of unreleased passion.

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