This painting is more for the article than art.

These hapless crows frequent rooftops

Only to be shooed by everyone

Down they put their foot one day and said

‘This is not done.’

They gathered all one fine day

To show their hat tricks

And stood tall above the horizon

They did the crow gymnastics.

So by the government, recently

They were felicitated

All those in the habit of shooing crows

 They will henceforth be castigated.

 

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  • Mr Ghaz on Oct 6, 2009

    Simple but very attractive and unique poem..I liked the art too! Nice one..Thanks :) .

  • martinpm on Oct 7, 2009

    wonder, great work. nice painting!!!

  • chitragopi on Oct 7, 2009

    For the first time I find the crows beautiful, in your art as well as poem.

  • giftarist on Oct 7, 2009

    Nice piece..and a nice work of art..

  • CA Johnson on Oct 8, 2009

    I thought the painting was just beautiful. I also enjoyed the poem too. You really did a great job.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 8, 2009

    The painting is really an art

  • K.Reshma on Oct 17, 2009

    Well done

  • Kip Spleen on Oct 23, 2009

    Ha! I must read something else you have written.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 27, 2009

    you’re such a good painter.

  • Teves on Nov 12, 2009

    I like this poem…

  • erwinkennythomas on Sep 15, 2011

    wonderful!

  • ittech on Dec 1, 2011

    wonderful

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