Alone outside in the darkness.

 

 

We agree to me tonight in the meadow,

at midnight when all is quiet.

We will be alone outside in the darkness,

celebrating our chance to be together.

I will feel like Cinderella,

as you capture my mouth with a kiss.

Your strong embrace will hold me close,

beneath the clear and starry sky.

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Comments (7)
  • Deep Blue on Jul 19, 2009

    That’s the best chance there is.

  • sheba on Jul 19, 2009

    Very enjoyable to read. Thanks for the write!

  • rajeev bhargava on Jul 19, 2009

    very romantic. i love real-life fairy tale poems.

  • ken bultman on Jul 19, 2009

    Starlight and meadows bring thoughts of romance.

  • Tanya Wallace on Jul 19, 2009

    Wonderfully descriptive romantic poem.Great work.

  • Ramalingam on Jul 19, 2009

    Nice work.

  • goodselfme on Jul 19, 2009

    Very nice! So nice I wanted to read more.

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