Celebrating Our Love

Darla Smith on Jul 2, 2009

Tags: card, Dozen Red Roses, love, romance

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Let’s indulge in our wildest dreams.

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Your kiss makes my pulse quicken.

I love holding you close each night.

I have fallen madly in love with you.

I saved the dozen pretty red roses,

and the card that you gave to me.

Now that you are back once again,

we can celebrate our love tonight.

There are many pleasures ahead.

Let’s indulge in our wildest dreams.

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Comments (13)

Deep Blue on Jul 2, 2009
This one’s better. Inspires me.
Stumbleuponwriter on Jul 2, 2009
So awesome..well done, darla
goodselfme on Jul 2, 2009
Very gently and romantically composed.
mdartist on Jul 2, 2009
This is very sensuious! Beautifully expressed!
rajeev bhargava on Jul 2, 2009
a really beautiful poem that rejoices the pleasure of true love. well done!!
Southgate on Jul 2, 2009
Beautiful and sensuous.Thanks
STEVE666 on Jul 2, 2009
Have a wild night, Darla.
Mystify on Jul 2, 2009
A very romantic,sensual poem.Wonderful work.
CA Johnson on Jul 2, 2009
This is a great poem, darla. It has a beautiful meaning behind it.
Yovita Siswati on Jul 3, 2009
very passionate poem.
joey manfredo on Jul 3, 2009
concise but with many important aspects of a relationship noted!
ken bultman on Jul 3, 2009
Have a good time. The poem was good.
CutestPrincess on Jul 23, 2009
very romantic, i love it, and your photo is so sweet…

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