Most of us will be buried in cemeteries amidst a throng of graves.

Slabs of concrete

Head stones, tombs

And mausoleums

All laid out 

On pieces of ground

- – -

I can’t cease

To remember you

My Dad

Amidst this throng

When your body 

Was lowered in a casket

In a gaping hole

- – -

What will happen

To my loving father

Whose body was stilled

At a ripe old age

And is gone forever?

- – -

Now he’ll be fodder for worms

He’ll lay outside

In the elements

And rot

- – -

What a way

To have to imagine a loved one

Wouldn’t it be better

To have him embalmed

Like the Pharaohs

To be visible for eternity?

- – -

I still feel queasy

About his eventual end

Although I realize

That the body is nothing

More than dirt

To be dirt again

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

- – -

Yes, our bodies eventually

Will have to return

To the earth

In some form

Even if it’s cremated

- – - 

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  • Farzeela Fee Faisal on Aug 23, 2011

    Cemeteries reveal truth, nothing else.. true!

  • pattiann on Aug 23, 2011

    I thoroughly enjoed this

  • Rosettaartist1 on Aug 23, 2011

    well said

  • okkhattak on Aug 23, 2011

    well

  • CHIPMUNK on Aug 23, 2011

    well shared thanks

  • aheed411 on Aug 23, 2011

    Every soul shall taste death

  • papaleng on Aug 23, 2011

    Meaning thoughts. Ashes to ashes ..dust to dust. Yes our physical bodies will go back to where it was shape. but our spiritual body will someday see bliss.

  • Sebastian Onciu on Aug 23, 2011

    Well said,our bodies will return to dirt one day.

  • neopisiva on Aug 23, 2011

    I prefer not to think about the inevitable…

  • cterrell on Aug 23, 2011

    nice share

  • toomanysounds on Aug 24, 2011

    Really great stuff Erwin

  • vickylass on Aug 24, 2011

    A friend of mine who was a true seaman mssing the sea a lot died last year. He was cremated and his ashes were thrown into the sea. I do like this. Thanks for sharing.

  • Judy Liu on Aug 25, 2011

    I could imagine every bit of this. very nice! In the back of my head the song “dance with my father again” by Luther Vandross was playing.

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