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BS Anonymous on Dec 28, 2008

Tags: amazement, beams, glow, love, Rocking, season, Shift, steps

A poem about love.

Movements…
Stumbling…Falling
Unsteady ground
Change of directions
Rocking…Swaying
And…Balance beams…Shift
Weaving positions…
Feeble steps…Shake
With rhythmic…Movements…
Astonishing how…
Love in amazement…
Swirls…And swivels…
Back…Than forth…
Season-like…It glows.

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Anonymous on Jan 10, 2009
This is an interesting poem. I like how you made it so the readercan kinda use their own imagination with what is going on. Though may I sudjest that you give it a little more detail as to what is going on in your poem. just a thought.
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