Some pains are not suffered by one..but the other also suffers from it.

A drop of pain,
is like a chain,
it hurts the one,
and felt by else someone.
A hungry child,
no food, no water,
not only his ache,
but felt by a mother.
A wandering cow,
just lost it’s mom,
on the other hand,
the mom searches for her son.
Two brothers,
plays on the park,
one falls down,
the other one’s hurt.
A leaf of the tree,
when turns to fry,
the others no stop,
they sooner get dry.
When a pup is teased,
by some spoilt brats,
it’s mother comes,
to bite them bad.
When tears fall down,
from the eyes of a lover,
his friends are there,
for his grief to uncover.
When a child comes,
from the womb of it’s mother,
their feelings are divided,
whether happiness or pain,
and this feelings are called the reactions in chain.

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Comments (10)
  • jaysonv on Jan 4, 2010

    love hurts..good post..

  • PhoenixRox on Jan 4, 2010

    This was brilliant. It really was. The imagery and the pain just shows up so well. Very well expressed. Things are indeed interconnected.

  • AlmaG on Jan 4, 2010

    This is very true!

  • wonder on Jan 4, 2010

    Yes we do not live in isolation.A good idea and well portrayed.

  • upeshdaa on Jan 4, 2010

    wonder , very fine.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 4, 2010

    Excellent choice of words. I can feel the pain when I read your poem. Gr8 work, Priyanka.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 4, 2010

    amazing poem

  • metro7 on Jan 4, 2010

    How true pain n happiness go hand in hand.nice poem.

  • mkd1788 on Jan 4, 2010

    you have made great job…nice work

  • alliewal on Jan 4, 2010

    It’s true that feelings cause a chain reaction. Good when it’s joyous, not so much when it’s sad. It’s important that we connect with each other through those feelings.

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