This my unusual way that I responded to a discussion queastion in college today(Feb. 26, 2009). Laura is one of my classmates at Axia College at University of Phoenix.

Oh, Laura! I’m sorry to say
You’re sadly mistaking,
For every minute of everyday
One  will change through time
Day after day
It might be to slight for you to see
But when you do move away
Then come back to your family
They will for surely say
“Boy, have you changed!”
For everything around you
Will influence you to change
In hopes for the better
And not to discourage you
That you might fall down that ladder
Cause that might happen too.
Just remember these words
I say to you
For every minute of everyday
One will change through time and space
From day after day

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  • Darla Smith on Feb 27, 2009

    Very nice.

  • seeingrhed on Feb 27, 2009

    Yes we all change, due to our surroundings and the people we interact with.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 27, 2009

    very encouraging.. I can see that you take care of friends..

  • amanda0051 on Feb 27, 2009

    very nice, i like it..

  • David Cartier on Feb 27, 2009

    very nice tammy you are an interesting poet with great insight

  • F J McCarthy on Feb 27, 2009

    Very True I am here today ,tommorow I will be changed ever so slightly, even as i type I am changing. Thank you Tammy.

  • Anne McNew on Feb 28, 2009

    nice work

  • Karelee on Feb 28, 2009

    Good or bad.. life changes. Good job!

  • trw on Mar 1, 2009

    good thing they dont know you in person and how you really are!

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