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biantoro on Feb 18, 2010

Tags: friends, love

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Change the future is our own.

two weeks had passed
two years was not met
a friend
in childhood

I know you’re more intelligent
you are a diligent
always number one

now we changed
I’m smarter than you
I was more diligent than you

This evidence
I was more successful than you
but we always be friends
compete for good
mutual help
though we have changed

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Comments (24)

ashan1614 on Feb 18, 2010
Diligence does indeed pay off.
chellsy on Feb 18, 2010
its true my friend.keep sharing
LOVELYHONEY on Feb 18, 2010
UR INTELLIGENT UNDOUBTEDLY MORE THAN I
Marie Antoinette on Feb 18, 2010
Due diligence denotes intelligence.
8Shei8 on Feb 18, 2010
Keep on writing! Well said.
Kristie Leong MD on Feb 18, 2010
Very nice.
Inna Tysoe on Feb 18, 2010
thanks for that.
Eunice Tan on Feb 18, 2010
Very well said. Good poem about friendship.
sambhafusia on Feb 19, 2010
Great share!! interesting and well expressed…see u in my post….
Jimmy Shilaho on Feb 19, 2010
A nice little poem.
Lord Banks on Feb 19, 2010
Good work nice poem keep it up LB
seema1962 on Feb 19, 2010
very nice poem
Starpisces on Feb 19, 2010
well done!
Darla Cooke on Feb 19, 2010
Nice poem.
Mark Gordon Brown on Feb 19, 2010
nice work, it is nice to share about your friend
yes me on Feb 19, 2010
You are as smart as you wish to be
nice poem friend
albert1jemi on Feb 20, 2010
great poem
Ruby Hawk on Feb 20, 2010
Hard work often does pay.
yes me on Feb 22, 2010
Does it matter, who is top, or who is bottom, in the end game?
great share thank you.
AlmaG on Feb 22, 2010
A very lovely poem
ganeshgolha on Feb 23, 2010
Good poem!
Hepsi.M on Feb 23, 2010
well said,true to feelings poem..!!
joyhyena29 on Mar 19, 2010
well done^^
Muhammad Idrus on Aug 2, 2011
well… nice poem.. add mas ya…

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