One more try moony today by LH.

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Moony cresent

The moon faced lass

                                                   I’ve always wondered how a sweet lass,

With a face almost like

The crescent of

The new moon,

Will look

Like if,

One

Had

To

Have

One,

Taken

Right away

By some one,

A millionaire perhaps,

Away in a space-ship, really big,

Right away to now, which is a full moon?

Having now achieved it,

I don’t wonder,

How late, or how soon

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Comments (5)
  • cardy on Oct 10, 2009

    Nice write liked this read.

  • jimbob1 on Oct 10, 2009

    I thought your Moon stuff might have been in response to NASA doing its double slam into the moon yesterday morning. The animation of what was expcted to happen was very dramatic. I got up early to watch NASA TV channel to see the crashes live yesterday morning…what a bust that was…anyway…that’s my take on it anyway.

  • raman13 on Oct 10, 2009

    excellent

  • chantell on Oct 10, 2009

    Great work.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 10, 2009

    Interesting poem, liked it!

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