Beware of the vampire.

I met a charming and handsome stranger,

with hair the color of a midnight sky.

He appears only in the twilight hours,

for he walks among the living dead.

He sleeps while the sun is shining,

and prowls the streets during the night.

He needs nourishment for his survival,

leaving his victims weak from blood loss.

Don’t expect to escape from this vampire,

for you cannot resist his hypnotic gaze.

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  • qasimdharamsy on Mar 1, 2010

    Nice one…

  • moneynwealth on Mar 1, 2010

    enjoy reading the poem, romantic but scary.
    :) good health and success,
    http://healthfitnesswebsite.info

  • johnnydod on Mar 1, 2010

    look into my eye\’s you are feeling very sleepy

  • diamondpoet on Mar 1, 2010

    I\’ll have to stay away, I am afraid of needles. lol

  • STEVE666 on Mar 1, 2010

    Just flash a crucifix—that usually works!

  • clay hurtubise on Mar 1, 2010

    I’d say it’s time for you to write a book!
    Good job,
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Olivia Van Logum on Mar 1, 2010

    spooky!

  • ken bultman on Mar 1, 2010

    I’m already anemic.

  • giftarist on Mar 1, 2010

    That was great.

  • Butterfly Musings on Mar 1, 2010

    awesome!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Mar 1, 2010

    Darla, I don’t want to meet up with this fellow.

  • Goodselfme on Mar 1, 2010

    Well penned with great depth.

  • chefpete41 on Mar 1, 2010

    Thats sounds like the blood doner guy thats stands out side the local college.

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 1, 2010

    i really enjoyed reading this poem. the title is beautiful aswell as nobody will suspect that it is about a vampire. the verses read wonderfully and the ending is brilliant. a truly enjoyable poem to relish. i LOVE it.

  • standingproud on Mar 2, 2010

    oh bit me

  • Temjen Imchen on Mar 2, 2010

    I think I should stay indoor at night to avoid meeting him…

  • albert1jemi on Mar 2, 2010

    great share

  • AlmaG on Mar 2, 2010

    Enchanting stranger… great poem :)

  • Pete Marshall on Mar 2, 2010

    enjoyed this well done

  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Mar 2, 2010

    Wonder Full

  • jovelledeguzman on Mar 2, 2010

    nice! :) keep it up.. :)

  • Kate Smedley on Mar 3, 2010

    Hypnotic and spellbinding poem Darla.

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