Charming Breeze

carissimi on Sep 7, 2010

Your softness entices me.

charming breeze

your softness entices me

it is gentle and loving

you swirl all around me

bring me smells from a far

charming breeze

you announce the rain is near

i appreciate your telling

for the rain is my friend

i see the grass sway

as you call the night

as we see the last lights

the drops start to fall

i smile as i reach for them

for the purify the air

and all our surroundings

gently washing away

what should not be there

charming breeze

my friend in the air

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Comments (16)

PSingh1990 on Sep 7, 2010
Beautiful poem………

I like it.

Thanks for share.
ceegirl on Sep 7, 2010
lovely poem
Sharif Ishnin on Sep 7, 2010
Cool poem.I feel refreshed after reading this.
TommyP on Sep 7, 2010
I believe this is my favorite of yours so far…
helmkhat on Sep 7, 2010
Never enough poems eyy
Joie Schmidt on Sep 7, 2010
So soft & gentle… just lovely*

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
mysocalledlife on Sep 7, 2010
i can feel the breeze through your poem! lovely
Abhipray Sahoo on Sep 7, 2010
Nice job!
Abhipray Sahoo on Sep 7, 2010
lovely poem!
Jswana on Sep 9, 2010
This is indeed charming! Thanks for sharing.
yes me on Sep 11, 2010
Nice one this cheers
1hopefulman on Sep 11, 2010
I love breezes! Thanks for recognizing them poetically.
MaxBuceo on Sep 12, 2010
I like it!… nice article
earthlyjewels on Sep 13, 2010
very nice! thanks for sharing!
Lipstick on Sep 14, 2010
your poems usually has touch of nature’s mystic
and i love them
Ukrainian on Sep 19, 2010
Wonderful poem! Love it!

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