Chatting on Facebook

Ethics0006 on Aug 11, 2010

Tags: Alone Zone, balance, chatting, Chatting with Friend, facebook, friend, Microphone, poem, Poetry, ring tone

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I write this poem while I am chatting with my friend on Facebook.

Nothing is wrong

I am calling on a phone

My all balance has gone

I am changing my ring tone

I want a gem stone

I need a microphone

I am alone

Are you in my zone?

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Comments (13)

Raj the Tora on Aug 11, 2010
Very creative new genre of poetry
LCM Linda on Aug 11, 2010
Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.
PARAM on Aug 11, 2010
Great post……Keep going.
Hettie on Aug 11, 2010
Nice poem, and a good picture to go with it. Hettie
Great Idea on Aug 12, 2010
Truthfully, the only difference between you and Chatting on Facebook experts is time. If you’ll invest a little more time in reading, you’ll be that much nearer to expert status when it comes to Chatting on Facebook.
Likha on Aug 13, 2010
This is an interesting poem. Tells so much about contemporary times.
sasuke191 on Aug 16, 2010
Haha!.. Interesting!.. Shows a bit of confusion!.. ^^
yes me on Aug 16, 2010
Nice little run here cheers
L R Humphries on Aug 21, 2010
Different and innovative, I liked this piece. Its quite raw and interesting.

Lewis
bellatwix on Aug 23, 2010
You get inspiration everywhere
akira14 on Aug 24, 2010
nice one
Aileen Tecson on Sep 6, 2010
interesting one!
Allison Jae on Sep 29, 2010
Cute, simple and creative.

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