My trifle of a cinquain – a five line stanza with syllables of 2, 4, 6, eight and 2.

Mina and Hwang Artwork

Lovers..
Faces aglow,
Gently pressed together;
Tender, intimate affection -
Cooing.

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  • Vinaya says good bye on Feb 7, 2012

    After reading your composition I am having a delightful minty tang.

  • marqjonz on Feb 7, 2012

    Pleasant cinquain. Irving Berlin, Fred Astaire, Ginger Rogers…

  • Shirley Shuler on Feb 7, 2012

    Hi Lady Sunshine, that’s a lovely cinquain, and so fitting for Mina and Hwang.

  • papaleng on Feb 8, 2012

    Cute image as always and sweet lines. :)

  • Starpisces on Feb 9, 2012

    I wonder why you always come with so lovely pics, to go along with you lovely poems, this is one of them.
    ;)

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Feb 9, 2012

    Another pleasing installment.

  • girishpuri on Feb 16, 2012

    i like it

  • dodolbete on Feb 29, 2012

    Heart warming. I love it ^_^

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