My poem about childhood memories.

Childhood memories
Playing in the sun,
Having lots of fun.
The cooties were real,
And playing in the sand was fun.
Childhood memories,
Were lots of fun.

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  • Ziggy C on Jan 14, 2009

    Liked this work. Great Job

  • Laura Smith on Jan 14, 2009

    Nice one, I miss being a little kid sometimes.

    Laura :)

  • Sotiris on Jan 14, 2009

    We all miss childhood!

  • James Timmons on Jan 14, 2009

    good memories

  • Darla Smith on Jan 14, 2009

    I don’t remember much about my childhood, but the fun things I do remember I really miss.

  • writingares on Jan 14, 2009

    lol there is a ton of childhood memories i could remeber.
    nice poem

  • Holly J. Harrington on Jan 14, 2009

    Thanks for the memories.

  • Joni Keith on Jan 14, 2009

    But I don’t want to grow up! Sweet poem, Denus. :)

  • Dry Ink on Jan 14, 2009

    Nothing like the good old days of childhood.

  • believer on Jan 14, 2009

    I was afraid of the cooties! good touch.

  • sable Rose on Jan 14, 2009

    This really bought back the child hood games I use to play

  • Poetic Angel on Jan 14, 2009

    We all like to remember the good childhood memories. nice poem

  • nutuba on Jan 14, 2009

    This has a nice playful feel to it!

  • James DeVere on Jan 14, 2009

    What are cooties? Cossie? Yabbies? Nice try but not your usual level of cleverness . j

  • monica55 on Jan 14, 2009

    Those innocent days: where are they? I’m having nostalgia ocver them.
    Good work.

  • Yovita Siswati on Jan 14, 2009

    Nice poem, beautiful pic too. Remind me of all the fun I had as kid.

  • diyanah91 on Jan 15, 2009

    nice one!

    thanks for the comment!

  • marylou on Jan 15, 2009

    oh the days of childhood! miss it sometimes.

  • rutherfranc on Jan 20, 2009

    Oh innocence! where have thee gone?

  • nesita on Jan 22, 2009

    it certainly brings back memories

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