Memories of a totally different way of life when I was a child.

I remember when I was very small
And we lived in a tiny terraced house,
Where rats played in the back yard
And the cat often brought in a mouse.
I remember the dark depressing street
Watching the miners as home they did come,
After twelve hours shifts in a thankless job
They looked so filthy, tired and glum.
I remember the shop on the corner,
Which sold everything we could possibly need.
Where meat and bacon came from the slicer
And broken biscuits satisfied our greed.
I remember the clogs worn by children
And the noise made as they clattered by,
And their tatty grey clothes and hand me downs
Which rarely kept them warm and dry.
I remember the loo at the bottom of the garden
With string holding newspaper squares,
And the weekly tin bath in front of the fire,
And when naughty being shut under the stairs.
I remember being made to share a bed
With my little brother who had bad dreams,
I used to hide my head under the blankets
So I couldn’t hear his frightened screams.
It makes you realise how lucky most of us are now
To have bathrooms and roofs over our heads,
With warm clothes and plenty of food on the table
And each sleeping in our own cosy beds.

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  • Darren Goad on Feb 26, 2009

    A very interesting picture you’ve painted.

  • BC Doan on Feb 26, 2009

    Memories made our lives more interesting! Very nice Christine!

  • Karen Gross on Feb 26, 2009

    It is amazing how much life has changed, although I supposed many people do still live like this. When I compare my life now to when I was a child, constantly moving,living in apartments where we shared a bathroom with other tenants, playing in the dumpster out back (we called it a tree house), some places we didn’t have indoor plumbing – my home now is a mansion by comparison! It’s good to get perspective.

  • clay hurtubise on Feb 26, 2009

    Just need to watch Slumdog Millionaire… still that way for millions worldwide.
    Good piece,
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Debra. on Feb 26, 2009

    Very nice poem, Christine, but don’t we all have our memories, bad or good. I guess the best thing about them is that that’s all they are is memories now, which is good, at least for the bad ones.

  • R J Grant on Feb 26, 2009

    Very pungent Cris.

    Grant

  • Betty Carew on Feb 26, 2009

    Oh Christine you brought back so many memories for me but as poor as we were we were happy. Wonderful poem Christine thank you

  • miraj on Feb 26, 2009

    yeah its nice to know how fortunate we are,but I think each is great in their own place,because even sleeping in cosy beds doesn’t
    stop the nightmares from coming.and while you contemplated a time said above,I am sure there were also moments of joy.nice piece.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,christine
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • S Air on Feb 26, 2009

    Hi, Really enjoyed reading this one, I loved the description of life as it was. Glad things have got better for you, but it does make you think.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 26, 2009

    Very good memory on childhood. Memory brought us joy and painful experience too.

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 26, 2009

    Lovely poem Christine, it makes you realise how lucky we are now.

  • monica55 on Feb 26, 2009

    It is good to reminisce sometimes, to see how we are doing in the stream of time . A nice reminisence, an a nice piece.
    Monica

  • Celia Heart on Feb 26, 2009

    So many memories similar to those of my childhood. Well described.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2009

    I am so glad you liked it and that it brought back memories for some of you as well. Thank you for reading it.

    Christine

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 26, 2009

    For some reason this poem reminded me of the movie “How Green Was my Valley”.. Don’t know why… Great job Christine!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Feb 26, 2009

    Wow, Haven’t things changed? When you think about it it’s unbelievable. My childhood and my young married life is as different from now as night and day.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 26, 2009

    It’s funny, but as a child it probably seemed normal. It’s only in looking back, when you have something different to compare it to that you realize how hard those times truly were. Very descriptive and beautiful poem.

  • Poetic Enigma on Feb 26, 2009

    A Very Beautiful Portrait You Painted With Your Words,
    This Is A Lovely Poem (:

  • Radhika Bhargava on Feb 26, 2009

    Yes its true childhood is very good,even it reminded me of my childhood.

  • Judy Sheldon on Feb 26, 2009

    When I tell my children what we went through growing up they laugh & say “Yeah, and you probably walked to and from school uphill!” They have some stories of their own though, as things were not always easy. They grew up in Harlem and the South Bronx so they can tell some tales that will make your hair stand on end.

    Christine, I love your poetry. You have a way of making anything beautiful.

  • AC Hamilton III on Feb 26, 2009

    That was a really intriguing story. I loved it! Nicely written as usual. Kind of makes me think…the uncomfortable comforts..and….the inconveniences of the convenient…..the richness of being poor…Extremely enjoyable with lovely voice.

    AC

  • JOSELITO B BISENIO on Feb 26, 2009

    nice work…loved it…

  • papaleng on Feb 26, 2009

    nice article Christine but memories of the past whether good or bad did help us in our present life. the lessons learned did shape who we are now.

  • Unofre Pili on Feb 27, 2009

    I definitely learned a piece of England in your very effective and descriptive lines maam. A very nice story told in poetry.

  • Melody SJAL on Feb 27, 2009

    Great memories. A typical provinciall life you\’ve vividly pictured.

  • Blue Buttefly on Feb 27, 2009

    It whiled me back to my childhood. Very nice poem!

  • Anne McNew on Feb 27, 2009

    great memories…. it really makes us smile to be reminded of our past…

  • Hazel Crowther on Feb 27, 2009

    Very very nice captured the time so well.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 27, 2009

    good read… it brings back my childhood memories too,

  • Carolyn Ann Aish on Feb 27, 2009

    Well written with excellent word-pictures here! What a wonderful way to keep past memories alive! Would be wonderful illustrated with pictures to pass on to up-coming generations. Well done.

  • mark ramsay on Feb 27, 2009

    You sound as if you lived in the dark ages Mum. Only joking. Good poem.

  • drewjthomas on Feb 28, 2009

    hi christine,
    i come by way of poetic enigma\’s pitch of darkness, i think; i mean, i am not sure which of her poems i read you comment on. your own poem has quite taken off away to many places and readings settling nearest roert louis stephenson; not anymore sure how he spells it \\ spelled it. very much i like your poem, i know, because i actually felt my attention being pulled more and more out of me as though \’twas a rope. however i felt the poem make its logical/sensitive/true-theme bye-de-bye as \’I\’ hid her \”head under the blankets\” to avoid \”hearing his\” \”screams\”.

    –drewjthomas

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 28, 2009

    Thank you so much everyone. I really appreciate your support. It was nice to read about your own experiences. It takes you back.

    Christine

  • gianne on Feb 28, 2009

    This speaks to me on so many differnt levels. Going back FEELS like moving ahead sometimes….the journey is what hods our joy, I think.

  • Lisa Clayton Williams on Feb 28, 2009

    Well written, great read! So true…it is good to look back at where we came from…it does make us realize how far we’ve come!!

  • vim3 on Mar 2, 2009

    Very true..we often forget what a paradise we are living in.

  • Colleen Ranney on Mar 6, 2009

    It\’s true we are so lucky and possess more than enough.Great poem. I enjoyed learning more about your childhood and am happy to have you as a friend on triond also.

  • Jacques Berkeley on Dec 6, 2011

    Excellent!

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