Chilliness and Breeziness

carissimi on Nov 28, 2010

Tags: Angels, care, carissimi, enchantment, hearts, joy, light, moment, share

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Wisping with the wind.

chilliness and breeziness

wisping with the wind

circling the moment

lifting hearts as it spins

loving the enlightenment

embracing inner joy

understanding the enchantment

as it tingles in the air

holding it for just a moment

watching it as it whirls

as i release it with care

it flies & plays with my hair

for love is meant to share

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Comments (14)

alvinwriter on Nov 28, 2010
Very nice!
Anuradha Ramkumar on Nov 28, 2010
Love is definitely meant to share…gr8 write.
Uma Shankari on Nov 29, 2010
soft and sweet.
SimplyShash on Nov 29, 2010
“for love is meant to share”…. Sweet knitting with words.
pearl2010 on Nov 29, 2010
Wonderful and beautiful poem.
awesome11 on Nov 29, 2010
Nice write dear ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
yes me on Nov 29, 2010
liked this one cheers
PSingh1990 on Nov 29, 2010
Nice Share.
Likha on Nov 29, 2010
Hi carissimi, I see you’re still at it… writing beautiful poetry.
My World on Nov 29, 2010
Good Stuff.
Freethinking on Dec 1, 2010
Nicely put, even though we are having heavy rains, flood warnings and winds of 50 mph, your piece took my mind off of the rest. Thank you.
Jswana on Feb 20, 2011
Quite nice!
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Thank you
Melody SJAL on Sep 24, 2011
Lovely!

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