About a box of chocolates she gave me.

Love in a wrapper,
Heart in a box.

Light as cotton,
Black as locks.

I still remember that heavenly taste,
Ah! Those lovely blocks.

I could feel them coming,
From miles away.

There are no barriers,
In love, they say.

I still remember that heavenly taste,
Ah! Those lovely blocks.

The time stopped,
When I took a bite.

The day light changed,
to a starry night.

No words can express,
my insight.

Ah! Those lovely blocks.

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Comments (6)
  • The Black Enigma on Dec 15, 2008

    Very nice and imaginative!!!

  • Inna Tysoe on Dec 15, 2008

    That was fun.

    Thanks,

    Inna

  • Ranjan Mathews on Dec 16, 2008

    Very choclaticious!

  • eddiego65 on Dec 17, 2008

    I feel the same way when I eat chocolates. Cute piece.

  • Olivia Reason on Jan 11, 2009

    I love chocolate, too. Nice work.

  • ridhhima on Mar 7, 2009

    i could actually see the chocolate in the poem!!

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