Life choices can be your own, or can be based on the opinion’s of others.

Life is a series of many choices
Choices made both good and bad
Outcomes heard in peoples voices
Exuberant good to down right bad

So, how are these choices to be made
Should one ponder, determine one’s own fate
Or is it better by other’s opinions to be swayed
Which, we ask, does the better life create

My mind demands that choices be mine alone
But I am mature, with much education to assay
Luxuries that to few men fate has thrown
Will I have the better life then, or will they

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  • Darla Cooke on Nov 17, 2009

    Very good poem and well written.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 17, 2009

    We should be very selective of the things we do, they could impact us the rest of our lives. Good write.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 17, 2009

    no answer? this touches an important issue with me.

  • Aiyanna on Nov 17, 2009

    This is something a very close friend of mine told me and it changed my life forever!! Thank you for documenting it in such an interesting way… :)

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