Chosen

Lady Sunshine on Sep 9, 2009

Tags: Bated, Bated Breath, breath, calloused, chosen, demure, hands, plucked, quivering, sunflower

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…at last!

Demure sunflower
Quivering with bated breath
Plucked by calloused hands

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cutedrishti8 on Sep 9, 2009
Nice one to share..Great work,,
ken bultman on Sep 9, 2009
Lovely haiku.
papaleng on Sep 9, 2009
this is so cute, if a woman holds such qualities then no wonder she be chosen.
Christine Ramsay on Sep 9, 2009
This is such a lovely haiku.

Christine
Sourav on Sep 9, 2009
Nicely written. Good Haiku.
Lostash on Sep 9, 2009
Lovely! You should have used my sunflower pic!
Shamanz on Sep 9, 2009
great stuff mate. A well written haiku.
Jenny Heart on Sep 9, 2009
Great choice of words. Powerfully said. Like it!
Melody SJAL on Sep 9, 2009
Nice haiku…great imagery.
Shirley Shuler on Sep 9, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, beautiful haiku, you said it so well, as only you could!!
Collette Edwards on Sep 10, 2009
such big meaning with so few words, awesome job… LOVE IT!!
Yovita Siswati on Sep 12, 2009
nice haiku

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