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By Jimbob1(c) January 20, 2011(Author’s Note: This was the feedback comment that I posted in response to a poem written by Christine Ramsay – see the link to her original work below. At her request I have posted my feedback comments…)How very neat and kinda sweet
to write a poem about you feet…
cutting toenails is one of the chores
but at least you can still see yours
this is something I regret to say
sometimes tummy gets in the way
or without my glasses I greatly fear
I can’t see my toes they aren’t very clear
dealing with feet – aye there’s the rub
I often rest mine on the edge of the tub
that is a solution I find quite peachy
then it’s not too far to reachy
as for your poem don’t have a fit
because I have voted I really like it
now whether you’re clothed or in underwear
I want to say “Thanks and take care.”

Read more: http://authspot.com/poetry/help-i-cant-reach-my-feet/#ixzz1Bbhv5SXs