A modern five-line cinquain about babies.

Babies

Precious, Innocent

Crying, Needing, Sleeping

God’s gift to parents

Beautiful

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  • Kate Smedley on Apr 28, 2009

    That’s so lovely …

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 28, 2009

    I think it is beautiful too.

    Christine

  • QuinMonty86 on Apr 28, 2009

    That is just precious!!

  • Poetic Enigma on Apr 28, 2009

    This is a lovely poem,
    Very well done (:

  • Leah Reyes on May 4, 2009

    So very true. They are the most precious gift in the world. I loved how you expressed emotions of their tiny beings. Well done!

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